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Charlie (Haiku) by INTRANSIT

Glowing orb with spots Circular motion, it swings Joy in a fishbowl

Caducus 27-Nov-02/5:41 AM
Life is a goldfish bowl and we are like Charlie, hope you didnt buy him off a pikey. i always like the way you express max out minimalist.




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