Caducus27 Nov 2002

I had the benefit of a few pointers you gave me on the comments page of your other work 'Another Chance'.
Thanks to the background I understand this perfectly but to the uninformed it may be difficult to comment on as theirs no indication to what the addiction is, and a need to know more may be the problem.
However i think its a strong piece-well done, just work with it, make a few drafts-try again and resubmit after careful edit.