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Charlie (Haiku) by INTRANSIT

Glowing orb with spots Circular motion, it swings Joy in a fishbowl

<~> 26-Nov-02/8:05 PM
swing the meaning a bit. my favorite haikus have a twist implied within. e.g.--the first 2 lines make me think of a disco ball, but your title isn't duplictous enough to make the last line a relevation. see it?




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