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Charlie (Haiku) by INTRANSIT

Glowing orb with spots Circular motion, it swings Joy in a fishbowl

poetandknowit 26-Nov-02/7:24 PM
Actually, I quite enjoy the haiku if used properly. I think it allows you: 1) to reduce emotion, sometimes difficult emotion, into simple images and 2) create pure imagery. However, folks seem to be tied up on English variations of it and forget the images for say, a comedic purpose. That bothers me. Ypu did not do that here, so don't pull a God's Wife on me.




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