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Charlie (Haiku) by INTRANSIT

Glowing orb with spots Circular motion, it swings Joy in a fishbowl

INTRANSIT 26-Nov-02/7:02 PM
Insecurity, mostly. Trying to balance work,poetry and time with my wife is frustrating. I'd rather verse and learn more than anything right now. Would you comment on my haiku, please.




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