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A Little Life (Free verse) by Tom Colebrooke

The Humble little Bumblebee, It fly's around oh cann't you see. It comes from yonder little tree, And stings people like you and me. Afterwards it only dies, And makes little children cry. But all I want to know is why, It can't just say a little 'Goodbye'.

Pushkin 26-Nov-02/2:14 PM
Well ill give you 2 for effort (all 2 minutes of it) and ill give you 1 for the poem as it has basic (very basic) poetic forms of rhyme and rhythm, therefore i give it a grand total (soo dosnt deserve this much) of 3




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