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Another Chance (Free verse) by Bonehiss

If I had another chance To live my life with you, My path would have a heart once more My soul would be as new, I'd show the world my love for you My beloved jewel, my bride, I'd never seek another I'd be always by your side, And when my final days drew near I'd face the setting sun, To dream through all eternity Of the life we shared as one.

hobojo 26-Nov-02/7:35 AM
This poem sounds like words of a cheating man - too eloquent - to easily muttered, too slick.




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