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The Nicotine Addicts Jangling Tobbaconists Conversation (Other) by Jigg

I need a certain lighter I require one that's brighter One that sparks at dash And I need it in a flash Not this one or that No not one with a cat Nor the one with the bat I wont do with any old tat I need a certain lighter one that is somewhat mightier No, not one covered in scratches Oh fuck it, just gimme matches

Jigg 22-Nov-02/8:12 PM
And yet, you seem to have missed the vital point the whole poem makes, it is in fact an allegorical piece on the Franco-Prussian war. So sad to see that a poet of your vast...intellect, has missed these subtle undertones. For was it not the great bard himself who wrote "I would not eat green eggs and ham, not on a train , not in a plane..." so on and so forth.




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