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Night-mare
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It used to be her and Contradiction. Then there was Romance. A window in time is closing and she feels sexy in Victorias secret. Tonight, she slips into satin and tears.
INTRANSIT
20-Nov-02/8:26 PM
I have all the info i want in it. I dont like my line breaks though. Not cruelty. Definitely outside of me as I'm male,points for trying?
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