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"Why would I need to get in touch with you?" (Free verse) by Limness

The weight of those words crushes me The mean in between /that you did not think/ sinks /and i bleed quietly/ It's nothing It's nothing You didn't blink

<~> 20-Nov-02/8:26 AM
the action of not thinking and saying. that he did not think when the words came out; that he did not thik what they would mean, what they did mean. also, it's like a physical blow, set apart like that--because i expected him to think, to care, to not be such a tool.




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