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The Trail (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul

I have been wondering for so long. I can't seem to escape the darkness that follows swiftly behind me I make snap decisions on which way to go but still they follow relentlessly like savages after their pray I'm tired and I have lost all will to care if they... but just then a trail opens and its bright light seems to beckon for my arrival, so I go. Just as I am walking through the trail it closes and I am enveloped by the light that has now faded into what I feared the most and it now seems my salvation has turned out to be my downfall. It seems no one can trust what they see at first

Caducus 20-Nov-02/5:41 AM
is this finished? its not a poem and as a piece of literature its woefully uninspiring.
Keep on writing though, you can do it




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