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Sisters in Disquise (Free verse) by confuzdlilgirl

You are my right hand A sister in disguise I know what you mean I'm not blind behind these eyes You are my best friend We will and always will be Through thick and thin Together you and me I know that you'll always be near Even if we grow apart Because no matter what comes Memories will never part We have our differences It's obvious to all on the side But we take the others shit And we do it with pride I never thought I would Come to find a girl That felt just how I did And the way I saw the world Guys come and go But friends last a lifetime We've been through soo much Through such a short time No matter the time No matter the day I know no matter what I can always look your way I find it impossible To ever forget or hide Someone who has done soo much Who has always been by my side One day we will go And part to left and right But I know you'll always remain In my heart tucked in tight We have shared soo much pain And soo many tears We've shared so many laughs In only a few years The future can try to split us But it will take many tries Before we're gone for good For we're bound like sisters... in disguise.

poetandknowit 19-Nov-02/7:35 PM
Now, I am really not sure that I know how to read poetry, especially poetry that is this bad, but I don't think you really understand friendship. I think you need to experience things before you actually write about them.




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