newdawnfades19 Nov 2002

Thanks for the reply, but be specific. What would make this a better attempt? Any constructive criticism is welcome. :) BTW, this is by no means a finished product. Lines 7-10 interrupt the flow of the poem, but I haven't thought of a replacement yet. I'll check Christof's stuff out.

Ha! I don't imagine the mullet ratio is very high on this site, thank God.