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All is Just a Crush (Sonnet) by confuzdlilgirl

Is love alike a path of brush we find?? A road it seems goes on to endless view Mists of truth and light of charm combine Impulse to lay a path with someone new A time where boulders come within the way Where truth's deceived in what we wish to see When spoken words direct where one will lay For one to own the feel of being free The warmth inside to which we all adore A new sense is now intensified Then grace and mystery fall to the floor A sensation once present, now denied Once thought this love could never fade like dust; Knows love did fade and all was just a crush.

confuzdlilgirl 19-Nov-02/4:13 PM
THis sonnet i wrote for english. we were assigned to compare love to something and modernize it into our version of SHALL I COMPARE THEE TO A SUMMER'S DAY. i thought well he talks of eternal love but people these days always say they are in love then find that it was just a crush. many didnt get it, just a general idea. im just kinda speaking from where i like someone a lot in the beginning but it lasts only a while but i never say that im in love because i know it takes more. though some people say they are after only a week. and that is just not true, it takes more im my opinion.




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