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missing you (Free verse) by Goose

I remember when I used to wait with baited breath for your call We discussed it all Then we would discuss it again That was when you would tell me a dirty joke Then poke fun at my reaction Then came lives and distraction The calls began to fade

Goose 19-Nov-02/8:28 AM
I agree with you. Thanks for the input. I have dropped those last two lines and I like it lots better.




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