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Youth Fair (Free verse) by daniella

..................................................... Beautiful view of laundered yards, A church, a schoolyard, shooting gallery. Buy your token at the far-right stand. Take your turn. You Lost? Do come again. When the sticky pink cotton dress Gets stuck between your thighs, You'll remember all those days, all those ways of making it up.

daniella 18-Nov-02/6:23 PM
grazie p.a.k. good point. it was taken from the tip of my tongue and clicked out here. i agree, and will wait for the ferris wheel to come around again and prime it!




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