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The Way It Is (Haiku) by Tascobar

A fat child, taunted. Harsh words, spoken without thought. Law of the Playground

Tascobar 18-Nov-02/5:29 AM
Quite correct. But look again, young infidel. 'Twas not the taunt which is spoken without thought, but the harsh words. When being pedantic, please also try to be accurate. That's all, comrade.




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