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Cancer Haikus (Free verse) by poetandknowit

#20 i asked you to fight until i learned to pronounce the thing killing you #26 if these cells knew you would they keep pushing forward or apologize #31 four in the morning i miss the hospital food and the nurse's smile #40 morphine takes your pain so much left to say to you please, do not go yet #50 sometime in the night just as i walked through the door the embalmer called

poetandknowit 13-Nov-02/2:09 PM
Well minus the predictability of your bud razorgirl simply wanting to be on the opposite side of my viewpoint and going with the i-swear-it-is-a-word girl, this argument is pretty much a no brainier. Limonade, do you Newfies say "eh" a lot?




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