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Today (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

In this gloomy room I watch the rain It traces the pane I am the pain In this room I've gloomed

INTRANSIT 13-Nov-02/10:43 AM
Imagine you happen to be depressed and that it happens to be raining. You follow the drops down the glass with your finger.At that point you are depression itself,But there's still the awareness that you don't have to be that way if you don't choose to. The copied line really doesn't matter, to me.




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