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Cancer Haikus (Free verse) by poetandknowit

#20 i asked you to fight until i learned to pronounce the thing killing you #26 if these cells knew you would they keep pushing forward or apologize #31 four in the morning i miss the hospital food and the nurse's smile #40 morphine takes your pain so much left to say to you please, do not go yet #50 sometime in the night just as i walked through the door the embalmer called

razorgrin 13-Nov-02/6:55 AM
I agree with you, kiki.watch out for PAKI, though, as he doesn't take constructive criticism nearly as well as he likes to dish it out. As it stands, the guy's flaming me nonstop, gnawing on my leg like a rabid pit bull. He's sensitive about his poemes, be gentle with them.




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