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Smile (Free verse) by feelinglistless

When her face moved ? her skin vibrated in the wind. His eyes followed the edges of her mouth as they rose and carried her lips into a smile. It was as though he could see each muscle moving in a well-rehearsed ballet, where the silence of captivation was all the music that was needed. For a moment, she was the world and all within it ...

Poetie 26-May-02/5:35 PM
it was a little uniform, like it came from a romance novel. Didnt feel like a poem.




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