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Worldly Wise (Other) by anitawit

(16.4.84) Ah's got a bee in mah bonnit What nobody done, Ah dunnit Mah feet too big fo mah shoes Mah tongue doth wag as Ah choose Ah got no conscience, Ah got no grieves 'Stead Ah's got somethins up mah sleeves Ah's got no scruples of mah own What little Ah airs, Ah's got on loan Ah's a beast of prey, Ah hunts Ah grabs somewhere, somewheres Ah shunts Ah does all bad, but Ah lives in guise Ya see, Ah's worldly wise.

ecargo 9-Nov-02/5:33 PM
An interesting exercise in imagined dialect--"doth" in line 4 seems off; maybe "do" would better serve?




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