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Spontaneous Combustion/The Moth (Free verse) by ellisonandrew

You've been here 3 days now in this poky little 2nd bedroom or "My Room" as she calls it and each evening I have lunged overbalanced and missed you Tonight I realise you are far far stronger than I could ever wish to be as you taunt me getting closer, closer almost wanting me to attack but tonight I stayed calm and watched you as the light bulb disintegrated your lack of bones..

anitawit 9-Nov-02/11:51 AM
I especially liked the last line and the second stanza of the poem. The last line of the first stanza does seem irrelevant, though.




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