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The heart of self destruction (Free verse) by Roisin

Your heart belongs to her, Described(by you)as your brown-eyed Sweetly naive french girl. You speak tenderly of her As we lie Flushed and moist; Guilt slowly covering our naked bodies Like a prudish blanket. How I am wronging this innocent stranger. I shall be The faceless assassin of her heart.

Dan garcia-Black 9-Nov-02/12:16 AM
Fine imagery. What you mean to say is understood without the (by you).
Been on both sides of this one. Painful but real.




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