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pale moon shines with borrowed fire as the flames of sun cool in the sea and she sits on embers ghosts of faraway suns long since vanquished by dark's cool fingers and men in awe worship rocks as they burn burn burn in times and places far

bluwiz 6-Nov-02/6:10 AM
uh oh. yeah, that was a booboo. sorry for that. 'she' is supposed to be the moon, but i suppose it makes it so confusing. i was refraining from using pronouns, but. *sigh* think i should do it over?




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