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You'll Never Hear (Concrete) by confuzdlilgirl

Does it matter what I say Or even what I wear Does it matter which way If both lead me there Do you notice I won't say What I really want to hear Do you even know you make my day When you don't make me tear Did you know that you light my way When everything is darkening near Did you know my smile will stay If you only take my fear Would you if I said you may Ask me to be and I would think you dear Why is it with my heart you play Yet tell me I'm all you wish to hear Why cant you simply say I want you always here I wish you understood my way OF how with you I fear Why is it you wont come my way You wont even come near Why is it words I wish to say Are the words you'll never hear

confuzdlilgirl 5-Nov-02/7:14 PM
I dont really get that comment but thats ok. this poem though you should know is not about me. its about a friend. wrote it to make her feel better. but thanx or the rating!!




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