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the queen of carts (Free verse) by snacktime

her domain encased in glass and protected from those who might trespass squared bubble numb cold blue white aqua fingers hold the fragile and rejected cigarette butt from the bus rider who has since boarded her lips pursed around carcinogenic warmth held loosely by yellow half-moons overgrown by neglect

god'swife 5-Nov-02/8:48 AM
I think what happened is I was trying to make the discription work for a shopping-cart, do to the title. Perhaps if you changed that, 'queen of the bus stop' not quite but something to that effect, then I'd be more prepared for the 1st image.




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