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Hells Game (Free verse) by Katie

Borrowed light from the sun, Reflects upon your face, The conflict starts, The blood rushes, Your palms ache, Sweating with pain. This anger is hereditary, But when you met your match, Two souls walked away, Two bodies left to lay 6 feet under it all. All the pain and suffering. You thought you were strong when you where weak, You thought you were warm when you where cold. You proved you would take his life, If he didn't stop being so stock, You shot him straight through his heart. You played the devils game, And for that, Forever there you will stay.

Katie 5-Nov-02/7:07 AM
Thank you Unity for coment, I went back and changed those spelling boo-boo's, as you can kinda tell I'm bad about that kind of stuff. But thanks!! and GUESS WHO'S BACK...BACK AGIAN...GUESS WHO'S BACK...TELL A FRIEND...haha JK!!!! But thanks agian for the help! =)




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