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#3 (Haiku) by mikejedw

This damp soil, chocolate frosting on the floating world-- ants in the garden.

lilli 23-May-02/2:31 AM
Hey -- this isn't half bad! I think "floating world" is a cliche, though, as well as being scentifically inaccurate (poetry doesn't give you a licence you know..)




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