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Untitled (Free verse) by vulcan

The silent hesitation Of duped eyes. A pair of blue eyes In the empty space. The flute helpless without lambs The grass wet. We must all believe By the old oak The love-lorn shepherd lives.

<~> 4-Nov-02/11:23 AM
these are disjointed images splattered about, with a hint cohesiveness to them. but not enough, and not pleasantly so. finish the thought. weave it together.




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