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fading (Free verse) by PunchMeInTheFace

We're enveloped by darkness As daylight buckles, breaks, and fades Under the weight of the rising moon. I develop a false sense of security, With the steady rhythm of your breath, Of your heart. Your presence is heavy. I drown in your smell. Why don't you to stay here a while? (forever) How can I sleep? I'm living a dream.

<~> 4-Nov-02/8:43 AM
hoe could you have wasted this potential: :Why don't you to stay here a while?
(forever)"

arg.




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