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crime scene (not for the weak!) (Free verse) by t_t_redhot

A call comes in, and I head out. Another patient, another death. Abrasions, lacerations, oh my god what happened here. Blood is everywhere, but I keep on looking. In another room, there is more for me too see. Amputation and bowel evisceration, can anyone be saved. I move fast, I hear a cry, theres more, but this one is alive. Facial avulsion, she is in pain. We take her first, she will be ok. One to the er, two in black bags. All in a days work.

t_t_redhot 4-Nov-02/8:24 AM
well to tell you the truth this is only the first time i have ever written anything like this but after getting the comments i have gotten it will not be the last. this one is only the start. check out my new one i wrote last night. and tell me what you think. it is called head-on collision. i would really like to know what you think of that one cause i ain't sure about it.




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