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Untitled (Free verse) by vulcan

The silent hesitation Of duped eyes. A pair of blue eyes In the empty space. The flute helpless without lambs The grass wet. We must all believe By the old oak The love-lorn shepherd lives.

<{Baba^Yaga}> 4-Nov-02/1:15 AM
the fifth line deserves a nine by itself, i enjoyed this read, because, of not only the acorn, but the sense of pan. and loveless songs to the infinite.




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