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i dunno (Free verse) by New Life Drug

I have found I have nothing to write about not one drop of poetic essence dripping from my mind unto my lazy fingers. Drip, drip, the saliva coats my sour tongue I taste the candy oh yum yum I have found not one step towards lines of beauty waltzing through my foggy eyes Waltz, waltz, my feet must walk I think i'll go to the movies to stand in line to be continued

New Life Drug 2-Nov-02/5:28 PM
I honestly didn't have anything to write about, so I wrote that. The interesting lines that follow are me writing about me not having anything to write about.. yet I do... I think the first line matters. I was going to finish the poem up later on (hence the "to be continued") but I suppose that is the end of the poem. It is not to be continued.. "to be continued" it is a line. And with that, why can't "I have found I have nothing to write about" be a line. Get it now? OH WELL. Just another poetic mistake turned into a confusing meaning by me...




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