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the ultimate battle (Free verse) by teacup

fighting struggling gasping I am being smothered. I can't fight back I'm going to be crushed When finally I'm set free I am sorry I angered him so by taking the last piece of pizza.

Nicholas Jones 1-Nov-02/1:32 AM
I like the fact that the first four lines could be some horrible cliched angsty poem, but then it goes off into comic territory at the end.




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