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All Alone (Free verse) by Normo

All alone By myself Staring at your picture Upon the shelf Wishing we Weren't apart Holding you close to me Sans broken heart But alas In my heart I know we are destined To be apart

Nicholas Jones 1-Nov-02/1:26 AM
There's a nice sense of inevitability, but I'm not sure if the simplicity of the verse structure works here.




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