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All Alone
(
Free verse
) by
Normo
All alone By myself Staring at your picture Upon the shelf Wishing we Weren't apart Holding you close to me Sans broken heart But alas In my heart I know we are destined To be apart
Nicholas Jones
1-Nov-02/1:26 AM
There's a nice sense of inevitability, but I'm not sure if the simplicity of the verse structure works here.
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