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morning (Free verse) by kiki

Everyday I wake to the basel movements of somebody's brother above my face. A single bone locked in the awkward circles of morning haze. Then, crawling out from under you, I recollect myself.

Tintagiles 30-Oct-02/7:46 PM
'Basel: German name for Basle. Basle: a commercial and industrial city on the Rhine in NW Switzerland; pop. 171,000 (1991). French name Bale, German name Basel.' I fail to see how a city can move in someone's brother. Unless you're misspelling 'basil', which makes just as much sense. Or do you mean bowel?




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