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... (Free verse) by logun2002ya

inspiration to be aquired, no other drug can take you higher... peace of mind when sound asleep, the dier need for one more release... can you help me eye'm begging, please eye'll do anything eye'll get down on my knees... this feeling inside eye'm trying to hide, if eye let it out will the pain subside? just one more fix... then eye'll try. (eye dont really know where this one came from...well...my mind of course, but eye dont know what eye was thinking about when eye wrote it.. .it isnt formatted right...eye think...but then eye was never really good in english)

logun2002ya 30-Oct-02/4:21 PM
you read it, and you responded to it, and eye am sorry if it impaired your sight...but truth be told...poetry is young as well as old...poetry is peace and wrath...poetry is taken and passed...comments come and go, you...noone will ever know...me...eye know who eye be...more than unique for mirror eyez catch the reflection of you as your gone...but my heart will transpire and carry on...watch what you say...eye might come to bite you one day...




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