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Hve you ever..... v2 (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

Have you ever driven through a downpour, and inches of standing water? Or through a snowstorm that made everything invisible? Or in a traffic jam that made you clutch till you were sore? If you have, then I welcome you, to the top of the cliff. And you may descend into the widening valley below. You will drive into the sun and be greeted by the hawk. You will drive into the moon and be chased by the mice... For you are home now. And your journey is just beginning.

<~> 29-Oct-02/12:42 PM
well, i see the small trials angle of it, but you are complaining about them. now, as for the g-string, that's a nice thought, but i mostly 'go commando'.




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