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The Black Hearted Sunflower (Haiku) by anitawit

The black- hearted sunflower Is kin to the sun Even though it carries about Darkness in its heart

Tintagiles 29-Oct-02/9:08 AM
Though I can be a pedantic purist, in this case, I simply don't find it a very good poem, haiku or not.




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