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Worth the wait (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I have unloaded my cars, leaning on a post I wait for someone to check them in. A mother passes me, carrying her son, and six feet behind her a small, denim jacketed, pink leg warmed, white tennis shoed, blue bereted little girl follows. A singular high white balloon carries her with teddy bear in arm. I find myself jealous.

Christof 29-Oct-02/7:17 AM
A very tender little skech. Simple and honest. By the way, I was interested in what you said about me sounding as if I'd worked on the road - I never have. What is it about my work that makes you think I have?




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