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The Green Emerald (Free verse) by ruella

I will cross the many rivers And journey over those damn places where the ground keeps sloping up My toes will be as sore as they need to Because everything depends on finding A rare, green emerald. And when I get it I will feel happy.

malakin 20-May-02/12:04 PM
beg pardon? I liked the imagery until I got to the emerald.. what's the point? that an emerald is the key to your happiness? if that's so, you're just demonstrating the worst shallowness I've evern seen..




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