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Darkness (Free verse) by The_Shadows_Smile

Beautiful night Beauty in death Surrounded in nothingness The skies are black The future is foggy What is beyond death? Nothing? Hate? Love? Pain? No man can know Because they are in darkness The darkness they created The pain they manifested The misery they caused The sorrow of having NOT come to terms with they're own life They walk the narrow path of light and Dark forever Only to intertwine thier life with the never ending sorrow To make the misery they feel real To manifest more pain Never leaving this saddened state Trapped forever in thier own darkness

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 28-Oct-02/10:29 AM
Either you are a psychology expert or your mystical insights into my mind are BS.

No, I don't agree. 'Dead Boy' is about as far from 'Gothic' as you can get. To illustrate the difference, I have rewritten it in a 'Gothic' style. You might want to check it out!!!!!!!1




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