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Second Attempt at Haiku (Free verse) by loneshadow29

thanks for the water life's flame will meet its end what? a trick candle?

Frass 28-Oct-02/8:29 AM
I like it, lnshdw; for my son's 20th b'day in August, I filled the cake with trick candles; he blew till he was blue in the face-hilarious.
What do you think, should the two sniper suspects' candles meet their end by being put to death in VA, or should MD try them?




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