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Missing You (Haiku) by psychedelic

The night sighs your name The day echoes your laughter... I can't help but hear.

Tascobar 28-Oct-02/4:21 AM
I don't think the last line works, unfortunately. Would have been a good haiku otherwise. Ho hum, such is life..... 4.




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