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untitled2 (Free verse) by ThreeFourSix

a lust for all, is a must for some, and when lust is must, the trust is none.

ThreeFourSix 27-Oct-02/7:50 PM
i kinda wanted "some" and "none" to rhyme, which they do. but yeah its just a silly poem.

thanks for your feedback!




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