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The Sea (Free verse) by Tarquin De La Bog

The Sea is wet. The Sea is deep (in places). The Sea is blue (aside from parts where industrial waste is pumped into it). The Sea is cold (generally speaking). We have all evolved from The Sea. I like to see The Sea.

-=SeTTle=- 25-Oct-02/10:01 PM
Childish drivel of the worst sort! I cannot believe that someone would look to the sea for inspiration. The use of parentheses is terrible. Unquestionably the worst poem I have read on Poemranker. Furthermore sir, excuse me, but hurf urf sir you are blocking both BBC1 and BBC2!!




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