anonymous19 May 2002

hrmmm...the words that comet to mind while reading this poem, include: SAP, CLICHE, SUPERFICIAL....you can imagine the rest. it feels like you're just saying someone else's words here..your emotions are valid, but you should find a way to put them into words people haven't heard before. try putting your emotions into a context...a fan loving a rock star, a dancer falling in love with a client, poor with rich...be creative, and make me interested in your love