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The Sea (Free verse) by Tarquin De La Bog

The Sea is wet. The Sea is deep (in places). The Sea is blue (aside from parts where industrial waste is pumped into it). The Sea is cold (generally speaking). We have all evolved from The Sea. I like to see The Sea.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 24-Oct-02/12:35 PM
Don't worry, Bachus! I know it's tough to be a working street poete, but some day I'm sure you'll be as good as me! Here's a three step guide to getting back on your feet:

1. Get a life buddy.
2. Stay off the hard stuff. It might be fun now, but it'll hurt you in the long run.
3. Get out a little! Socialise a little!

Ok? Friends? Great! I look forward to seeing you improve over the next few weeks and months!!




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