anonymous19 May 2002

wasn't enjoying the beginning, because i don't agree.. that's not what angels are for, to HELP the outer.. imo; but then YOU GOT TO ME with the wonderful lines
"those eyes
from God's library"

"write it down like a forged signature"

"compassion, mountainous, proportioned for the universe" .. etc

all of this latter part is sheer peaks above the introduction. What happened??? rewrite the beginning .. it 's not there...